>There is a note under a phone which says something like "do homework study for SAT's DON'T GET DISTRACTED" the phone alarm then goes off and there is a reminder that today is the last day to sign up for the SAT.
>The boy sits up in bed as his alarm goes off looking tired with messed up hair and looks up hearing their parents tell them to do their homework and not to forget to sign up for the SAT's by a certain date.
>The boy is then looking at his phone and goes on facebook, seeing several statuses about how people have done college applications and been studying all day. The boy fluffs his pillow and strongly lands back into bed. The boy is already fast asleep.
>The boy is then sleeping in a classroom and wakes up asking to use the bathroom.
>As he walks out he thinks about how he should do his homework and remembers the sounds of his parents telling him that he'll end up some loser if he doesn't. He walks by groups of other students talking about him and about what a loser he is going to be when he grows up.
>Time flashes forward where he sees himself homeless.
>He looks hurt but keeps walking pretending he never heard anything but he sees other groups of people saying the same thing and begins thinking that they aren't making fun of him behind is back. He goes to the bathroom and washes his hands and splashes water on his face, as he walks out all the people he saw are right outside saying the same things.
>He begins to run and in the middle of running he wakes up to the sound of the alarm.He bolts out of bed and grabs a comb, only combing half his hair before he runs over to his desk and begins his homework. Through a series of jump cuts he is doing jumping jacks, writing, slouching in his chair, and the whole time the clock is ticking.
>The clock is changing time rapidly, and the boy drops is pencil which is down to a stub with no eraser left, the boys hand is red.
>Happy and smiling they go back to bed, but wakes up shocked when they remember the SAT sign up. They smile when they think of how easy it would be.
>As they reach the computer and is about to finish signing up they see that they need a credit card for the online registration. Frantically he runs around the house looking for his mom or dad, he can't find either.
>He begins rushing around the neighborhood looking for someone who would let them use their credit card, as the clock ticks closer to the cut off time. He thinks of who he could ask and relies on a woman, and thinks about the fastest route, he sighs when he realizes how far it is.
>He pauses and looks up taking off without wearing shoes. He successfully reaches the woman is given a ride back to his house. He bolts through the door and pulls off his socks which have been worn down. He looks at the card realizing that it is a library card. He looks at the computer seeing a late registration day and falls off his chair and just lays there.
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ReplyDeleteThis idea is pretty descriptive and interesting. However, it doesn't fully relate to the themes presented by Run Lola Run. If you were to revise it to support this theme, it would be more better and make the overall story more lively.
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